Monday, April 9, 2012

A screenplay I began but decided to just write as a story instead


FADE IN:


EXT- COUNTRY ROAD- MORNING


A country road somewhere in Eastern California in sight of Sierras; the land is moderately flat. Vision stretches out beyond eyesight to north, south and west. The road is made of gravel and dust. Waist-high grass borders the road, which runs from the mountains out into the plain. An old road-sign leans to the right beside the road as the camera looks back east.

A short way off from the sign, Mars and Maggie stand together facing another man. The two stand together on the road and the other in the grass. Mars is pointing a blaster (futuristic gun) at the man in the grass- who is likewise armed. The captured man’s blaster is being held towards the ground. Maggie, who is visibly younger than the two men, steps away from Mars.

                                                MARS
                                    Is that all you have to say?


The other man says nothing. He looks at Maggie then back at Mars. He smiles. Mars shoots him.
The man falls backward into the grass.


                                                MAGGIE
                        No! What are you doing?

Maggie runs into the grass, drops down next the man’s body. The man is bleeding badly and shaking.


                                                MAGGIE
                        You shot him!

                                                MARS
                        Yes.

                                                MAGGIE
                        You shot him, you sonnava-bitch!

                                                MARS
                        Yes.

Maggie tries to resuscitate the man, but it is obvious he’s dying. She tries for several minutes to save the man’s life but it is a complete loss. The end result is her shirt is covered with the man’s blood.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Aren’t you going to help me? He’s dying.

                                                MARS
                        I wouldn’t have shot him if I wanted to help him.

                                                MAGGIE (still trying)
                        He’s dead. He’s dead. You killed him. You sonnava-bitch.

                                                MARS
                        Yes, that was my purpose.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Why?

                                                MARS
                        It was him or us.

                                                MAGGIE
                        You’re crazy. Him or us. I’m stranded in the middle of nowhere with
                        A raging psycho.

Mars looks at her, then turns away and walks to the other side of the road and squats down.
Maggie sighs and looks at her hands. She hastily wipes her hands on the dead man’s clothes.
She looks back at Mars, who is lost in thought, then stands up and walks over to Mars. She sits down next to him.

                                                MAGGIE
                        All right, I’m sorry, you’re not a psycho, but you’re so… so completely
Merciless.

                                                MARS
                        No, not merciless just efficient.

                                                MAGGIE
                        What?

                                                MARS
                        Efficient.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Efficient! You call that efficient. You just shot a man down in cold blood
                        And you have the nerve to call it efficient!

                                                MARS
                        Yes. If my father had had his way, then that would have been merciless,
                        But instead I was built to be different- a soldier template, so it was efficient.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Did you just say built? Like designed, like a machine?

                                                MARS
                        Yes, I was built at birth to be the perfect soldier.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Built at birth…Oh like a clone!

                                                MARS
                        No, after conception my father approached a Gene-scientist who regrouped
                        My DNA within my mother’s womb and added and separated certain chains
                        Forming me to become a template that more than likely would evolve into the
                        The perfect soldier.

                       


                        MAGGIE
                        Your father had you genetically altered to become the perfect soldier so you
                        Could do that efficiently.

                                                MARS
                        Yes-no. I mean he did have me genetically altered, but he wanted me to be
                        Templated to become a general. But his political rivals bribed the Gene-Doc
                        To make me a genetic mistake.

                                                MAGGIE
                        So, you’re just a screw up?

                                                MARS
                        No. The Gene-Doc had his own agenda, he made me into some-kind of super
                        Soldier template. So now I am just efficient.

                                                MAGGIE
                        So, you’re saying that soldier’s are efficient and General’s are merciless and
                        What you just did was because you were born or templated or designed that
                        Way?

                                                MARS (checking his blaster)
                        Yes.
                                                MAGGIE
                        That’s crazy. I mean that means your whole life’s been crazy. You can’t just
                        Go around killing people arbitrarily like that. You just can’t.

                                                MARS (checking the sights)
                        No? Why not.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Because it’s inhuman. We don’t go around killing people we don’t like.

                                                MARS
                        I don’t kill people just because I don’t like them.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Well, what do you call that? You obviously did not like him!

                                                MARS
                        Efficient.

                                                MAGGIE
                        Oh no, you aren’t going to start that again. Did you like him?

                                                MARS
                        No.

                                                MAGGIE
                        So you killed him, because you didn’t like him.

                                                MARS
                        No. He would have killed us. Besides I haven’t killed you.

                                               
MAGGIE
                        What? You don’t like me. (pokes him in the ribs)

                                                MARS
                        That depends.                                       

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